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Theres a growing fear in my heart,
Like spinning spider spindrills on the hearth,
Never ending, never showing signs of stopping,
Am I gone?....
Am I dirt?
Or am I lost?
Take me in the pit of rage,
Drag me through the dirt today,
I was lost,
But never found,
Cut thy throat, and let me bleed,
Hatred flows, and sorrow seethes,
I am in a world unknown and unkind,
When will I succeed to find the world that lets me breathe,
The air was putrid,
Full of shit I must not need,
The evil people,
Things that they told me,

So I hope,
And I stand, though all alone,
And I clench my fist,
Bloody it may be,
Raise it high,
Let rage fly,
Just be me...
I just can't stand the lonelyness of my life very much anymore, yet somehow I manage to keep going.
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rachelthepessimist Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OK, that last comment... I wont ask. This is a pretty emotional poem, though well written. It seems everyone's poetry is getting darker and more emotional lately. Why do humans have to suck to eachother? Nice job though, love the rhythm.
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xalmuz Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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rachelthepessimist Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.
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SheepRanchSniper Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
We agree We dont like eqach other and dont have anything in common anymore. Please quit stalking me. Stay away
I hate you. I have not seen you, talked to you or touched you in almost a year. All by your choice. Youcost me $50,000. I am going to annilhilate you.. You have humiliated me by telling me you slept with strangers,and putting up the pics and videos. You desreve everything you are going to get
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Scurron Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student General Artist
much of us feel that way these days :( I don't know why, but I feel fear too...
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